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The two bar charts below show the proportion of 14-to 16-year-old students studying a foreign language in an English speaking country, and the top three foreign languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two bar charts below show the proportion of 14-to 16-year-old students studying a foreign language in an English speaking country, and the top three foreign languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graphs illustrate the number of native
english
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English
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 speaker
students
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 ages 14-16 years old (male and female) learning
a foreign
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a foreign language
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languages
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 ( French, German, and
Spanish
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) in two different years (1984 and 2007).
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, female
students
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 were more passionate
in
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 learning new
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 as compared to
male
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males
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.
Furthermo re
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,
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 trend saw a decline in percentage over time; despite of
this
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female
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females
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 remained the highest number of
students
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. Meanwhile,
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the french
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french
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French
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 language was more popular ,
whereas
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spanish
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 was less likely taken by children. In 1984, the percentage of girls learning foreign
languages
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 started at approximately 49% ,
while
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 only 30% of
male
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males
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 were interested in learning
a new
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a new language
new languages
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languages
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.
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, a significant decrease
of
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in
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 population
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 in
female
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females
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 with only 40%,
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 there was a modest decline for
male
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males
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 at about 25 in 2007. Looking more at the graph, 50% enrolled in
French
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the French
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 language,
while
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 20% preferred to learn German and only less than 10%
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opted
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 to study
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spanish
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.
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, in 2007 a modest increase
of
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in
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students
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 studying
german
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German
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 and
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spanish
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Spanish
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dialect
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dialects
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, with 25% and 10% respectively.
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, less than 40% expressed their desire for
French
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the French
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 language.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, languages, spanish with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "modest" was used 2 times.
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