Task 1 The line graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Task 1 The line graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the
number
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of registered Australian people for several leisure activities in the year 2000 to 2020.
Overall
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, the trends varied across the given activities.
While
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some activities, like the Film Club and Martial Arts, remained stable, others,
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as Table Tennis and Musical Performances, increased.
However
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, Amateur dramatics witnessed a decline in participation. The Film Club consistently had the highest
number
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of attendees throughout the period, circling at around 65 million people.
Similarly
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, Martial Arts did not see many changes in its
number
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, hovering at around 40 million. Table Tennis witnessed a significant rise, starting at just under 20 members in 2000,
this
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rate increased significantly to above 50 by 2020, overtaking Amateur Dramatics by around 10 individuals. Musical performances started with no Attendees, yet in 2005 it recorded a noticeable increase, peaking at 20 members in the latest year.
On the other hand
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, Amateur Dramatics,
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in the beginning it had over 20 participants, its
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declined gradually in the following year, reaching its lowest point at below 10 participants.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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