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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at both
chart
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the chart
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 and table provided reveals exports
different
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of different
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 groups linked to a nation
in
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from
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 2015 to 2016. It is evident that petroleum and engineering items show the highest level (by under 70%) with
a
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apply
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8.5% and 3% growth.
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, textiles display the lowest percentage among other elements.
Further
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, as far as the gems, jewellery and agricultural cases
be
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are
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 concerned, it demonstrates that they do not have a considerable difference during
two
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the two
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 mentioned years
although
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 gems and jewellery lesson about 5.18% and agricultural products
increase
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increased
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approximately
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by approximately
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 0.81%. When it comes to textiles, it differs from 2015 to 2016, about 38% and 42% in 2015 and 2016, respectively,
along with
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 a remarked
increasing
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increase
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by
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of
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 15.24%. It should not be forgotten that in comparison to all cases, doing sports and expensive metals have a decrease in
two
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the two
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followed
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following
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 years.
However
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, the rest of
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the country
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country
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country's
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 exports
show
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showed
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the
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apply
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higher percentages in 2016 than
2015
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in 2015
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • categories
  • percentage change
  • value
  • machinery
  • textiles
  • agricultural products
  • raw materials
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • sector
  • growth
  • decline
  • economic factors
  • market demand
  • trade policies
  • contribution
  • anomalies
  • unexpected findings
  • implications
  • economy
  • trade negotiations
  • export strategies
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