The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data presented illustrates the different
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, conventional thermal Linking Words
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, out of 560 billion kWh generated, about 60% was through conventional thermal Use synonyms
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, the most dependence was on biomass, as it accounted for 39.3% of total renewable Use synonyms
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that way. Renewable Use synonyms
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