The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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I am summarising the
cost
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of
water
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in 5 cities in Australia. The
cost
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of
water
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is very different in different cities. The
cost
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of
water
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in Sydney is $ 0.98 per kiloliter (up to 125KL), which is more than
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double
than
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in Adelaide or Perth.
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, 3 out of 5 cities charged more when the
usage
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of
water
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is over 125
KL
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,
while
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Melbourne and
Syney
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Sydney
remains
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the same.
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, Perth charges $0.42 per kiloliter when the
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is up to 125KL
while
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charges $1.50 per kiloliter
while
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the
usage
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is over 125KL. The difference in the
cost
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of
water
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is more than 200%
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when the
usage
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of
water
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is over 125
KL
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.
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, the city that
use
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the most
water
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, which
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the highest average bill per
house hold
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household
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of $ 332 is Perth. The result shows that the pricing strategy does not work in reducing the
useage
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usage
of
water
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.
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