The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
I am summarising the
cost
of Use synonyms
water
in 5 cities in Australia.
The Use synonyms
cost
of Use synonyms
water
is very different in different cities. The Use synonyms
cost
of Use synonyms
water
in Sydney is $ 0.98 per kiloliter (up to 125KL), which is more than Use synonyms
a
double Correct article usage
apply
than
in Adelaide or Perth.
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that
Besides
, 3 out of 5 cities charged more when the Linking Words
usage
of Use synonyms
water
is over 125 Use synonyms
KL
, Use synonyms
while
Melbourne and Linking Words
Syney
Correct your spelling
Sydney
remains
the same. Change the verb form
remain
For example
, Perth charges $0.42 per kiloliter when the Linking Words
usage
is up to 125KL Use synonyms
while
charges $1.50 per kiloliter Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
usage
is over 125KL. The difference in the Use synonyms
cost
of Use synonyms
water
is more than 200% Use synonyms
raise
when the Wrong verb form
raised
usage
of Use synonyms
water
is over 125 Use synonyms
KL
.
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However
, the city that Linking Words
use
the most Change the verb form
uses
water
, which Use synonyms
have
the highest average bill per Change the verb form
has
house hold
of $ 332 is Perth. The result shows that the pricing strategy does not work in reducing the Correct your spelling
household
useage
of Correct your spelling
usage
water
.Use synonyms
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