You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for the celebration say what was good about the food and the service

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Dear Sir or
Maadam
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Madam
, I am writing to express my
dissatification
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dissatisfaction
towards your Hotel regarding an unsatisfied
cusine
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cuisine
on 12
december
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December
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2024.I celebrated my
friend
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friend's
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birthday party
on
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at
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your
resturant
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restaurant
.It is her 30th birthday
which
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apply
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we make
a
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apply
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merry on that day.
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,we spend only 1 hour
instead
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of 2 hours
of
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on
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booking
due to
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some issues
about
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with
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your meal. After
visit
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visiting
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your eating place,we ordered the
food
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which is
an mexican
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mexican food
a portion of mexican food
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food
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. After a long time,
server
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the server
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provides the
dishe
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dish
dishes
of
italian
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Italian
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kind of
reciepes
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recipes
.
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,
that is
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not much spicy
as well as
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sweet.
Hence
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we
didnot
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did not
enjoy the meal you provided from your eatery. I would like to request your server to take an
aproppriate
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appropriate
list from the customers.
This
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can help to
avoId
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avoid
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the wrong interrepution between the two persons .
Along with
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that.
pleases
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Please
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give a menu chart to check the
food
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which is available in your
food
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court.
Moreover
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,make sure the
food
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serve
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is served
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not more than 15 minutes. Yours Faithfully, Riya Mathew
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task achievement
Make sure to remain consistent with the purpose of your letter. Your introduction suggests you're pleased, but the content describes dissatisfaction. Clarify your emotions.
coherence cohesion
Develop your paragraphs with a clear focus, ensuring each contains a single idea that supports the purpose of your letter.
task achievement
Your letter includes key elements such as purpose, experience details, and suggestions for improvement.
coherence cohesion
You've used a standard greeting and closing, which is appropriate for a formal letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • outstanding
  • exquisite
  • impeccable
  • flawless
  • attentive
  • accommodating
  • courteous
  • prompt
  • delicious
  • mouthwatering
  • satisfying
  • memorable
  • thank
  • impressed
  • appreciate
  • grateful
  • recommend
  • celebration
  • occasional
  • special
  • occasion
  • stellar
  • exceptional
  • commend
  • commendable
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