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The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two charts graphs illustrate information about import data from
Australia
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 and
Japan
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 to New Zealand, from 1994 to 2004. Generally, it can be seen that
imports
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 from
Australia
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 increased significantly,
while
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 a considerable decrease was recorded by
Japan
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.
To begin
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 with, In 1994 New Zealand started
imports
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 from
Australia
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 around 4000
million
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NZ
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dollars
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. The trend fluctuated and dipped in 1999, with 3000
million
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NZ
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dollars
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.
This
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 dip was continued by another fluctuation and reached a peak
at the end
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 of the period (2004), with 8000
million
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NZ
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dollars
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. Similar to import data of
Australia
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,
imports
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 from
Japan
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also
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 experienced a fluctuation trend over the period.
Initially
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,
Japan
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 showed a dramatic growth from 3000
million
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NZ
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dollars
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 in 1994 to around 6000
million
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NZ
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dollars
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 in 1997.
This
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 rise was not sustained and continued with a fluctuation. After the year 2000, the
imports
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 experienced a significant drop in 2001, with almost 3000
million
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NZ
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dollars
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 declined and continued decrease. in 2004 with 2000
million
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NZ
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dollars
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, japan, imports, million, nz, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dipped" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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