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The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.

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illustrate
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illustrate
 the significant changes during a certain time period from 1967 to 2001-
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Felixstone
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Felixstowe
 developed substantially from
a
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farmland to a hotel with more amenities.
Shops
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has
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 been made into more permanent residences. Alongside more
energy saving
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 alternatives. In 1967, Felixstone had one accommodation a
holel
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hotel
hole
 located to the west of the cafe
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 and a fish market to the east.There was a pier to the south of the cafe. To the north at the cafe across the road was a high street with outlets full of
shops
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 to each of
it's
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 side. The
shops
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 were in between a golf course to
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its
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 left and a farmland to
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its
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 right.
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Felixstone
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Felixstowe
 had dramatically transformed a lot by 2001. Infrastructure like the wind turbine has been built at the very bottom of the village. More accommodations have been built
such
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 as
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 replacing the
shops
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 with apartments,
farmland
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and farmland
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 has been cleared to give space for a hotel with many facilities. The pier has been demolished and turned into a public beach, and a private beach
located
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 next
it
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 where the fish market once
stand
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stood
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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