The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied chart depicts the number of female and male
idividuals
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individuals
in an Asian country who
succeded
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succeeded
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their
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in their
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driving
test
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from 1980 to 2010. Generally speaking,
it is clear that
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more
women
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passed the
test
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, regardless of the year, than men. The former group achieved the highest percentage,
while
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the latter achieved the lowest. In 1980, a little under 50% of the
women
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that
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who
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took part in the driving
test
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passed, with a slight raise in the next 10 years to just over a half. It is worth mentioning that a substantial increase can be noticed in both groups in 2000. The percentage of
women
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rose from approximately 50% to about 68% which is the highest value in the graph,
while
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the information regarding men shows an increase from nearly 40% to just under 50% in the same year.
Moreover
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, the percentage of
women
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who finished their
test
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with a satisfactory result decreased mildly to about 65% in 2010,
whereas
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the data concerning men remained unchanged
to
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until
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the end of the timeframe.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words test, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Pass rate
  • Driving test
  • Trend
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Milestone
  • Comparison
  • Significant difference
  • Broad social changes
  • Policy changes
  • Surpass
  • Reflect
  • Implications
  • Disparity
  • Overall trends
  • Summarize
  • Statistical data
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