You travelled to another city on business last week, and there was a problem with your hotel room. Write to the hotel manager. In your letter… - Tell the manager about the problems you had - Explain to them how you feel about what happened - Let them know what actions you would like them to take. Write no less than 150 words You do NOT need to write any addresses Start your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I hope

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letter finds you well. I stayed at the hotel

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week for a business trip. It so happened that the room that was booked

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me was a mess when I came. I called

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them what was the problem. I'm still grateful that everyone came to provide assistance. I was disappointed with what happened as I am

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guest.

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took some time to clean the room

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my comfort.

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is the first time that happened and I will not give you

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negative feedback online. I want a complimentary stay or a discount on my next visit. Please address the issue

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your staff and be mindful

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their actions as

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affects the guest. I hope

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will not happen again. I hope to hear from you soon. Sincerely, ABC

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coherence cohesion

Make sure each paragraph is centered on a single idea to improve clarity.

task achievement

Expand slightly on how your experience affected your overall trip to fully address the task.

coherence cohesion

The letter begins and ends with appropriate greeting and closing, maintaining a formal tone suited for a complaint letter.

task achievement

The letter clearly identifies the problem experienced with the hotel room.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

144 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

amenities
dissatisfaction
remedy
compensation
reimbursement
inconvenience
unacceptable
resolve
satisfaction
improvement
customer service
unhygienic
malfunction
assurance
courtesy
reschedule
business trip
reliable service
accommodation

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