The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.
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The two pie charts display the comparison of various kinds of energy generation between 1995 and 2005 in France.
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, in both years coal was the most produced fuel with around one-third of the chart and other sources of power were the least. In 2005, only petrol had a dramatic fall with approximately 10 per cent,
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very little change. In 1995, coal was the leader in the industry and it protected its leadership in 2005. Gas was the second most produced kind of energy in both years. When it comes to petrol, a dramatic fall was recorded with around 10%. Nuclear energy and other sources almost doubled from 1995 to 2005.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "comparison" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nuclear energy
  • Renewable energy
  • Non-renewable energy
  • Technological advancements
  • Government policy
  • Environmental policies
  • Investment in renewable technologies
  • Traditional energy sources
  • Coal usage
  • Natural gas
  • Environmental regulations
  • Energy consumption
  • Energy production levels
  • Proportion
  • Broader trends
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