The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant .

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant .
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The bar chart represents the
export
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value of five various
products
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in a country in 2015 and 2016,
whereas
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the table compares each group’s
export
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changes in
percentage
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between 2015 and 2016.
Overall
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, more
money
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was earned through the
export
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of all
products
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in 2016 except for gems and jewellery.
Moreover
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,petroleum
products
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generated more
money
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across both
years
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while
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textiles had the least
export
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earnings. Petroleum ,engineered goods ,agricultural
products
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and textiles had an increase in
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percentage
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the percentage
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export
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of export
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money
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obtained in 2016.The highest
percentage
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rise was from textiles at 15.24%even though its total
earning
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earnings
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for both
years
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was
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were
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below $40
billions
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billion
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,
then
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followed by 8.5% from engineered goods in which the total
money
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obtained was over $
50billions
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50 billion
in both
years
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.
Percentage
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increase from petroleum
good
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goods
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was at 3% and agricultural
products
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had the slightest increase at 0.81%.
In contrast
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, Gems and jewellery was the only product that had a decrease in the
percentage
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of its earnings from
export
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between the two
years
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and decreased by 5.18%
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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, products, percentage, money, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • economic sector
  • percentage change
  • increment
  • decrement
  • fluctuation
  • trend analysis
  • year-on-year comparison
  • significant growth/decline
  • stagnation
  • market dynamics
  • fiscal repercussions
  • trade balance
  • competitive advantage
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