The figures below compare the number of internet users in several European nations as well as the prevalence of online shopping in these countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The figures below compare the number of internet users in several European nations as well as the prevalence of online shopping in these countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given are two figures providing a comparison of
internet
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use in five European countries (namely Switzerland, Germany, France, Spain and the UK) in 1995, 2000 and 2004,
as well as
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the popularity of
internet
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shopping in these countries. It is evident from the information provided that Britain had by far the highest number of
internet
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users in all three years. From 16
million
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in 1995, the number of British
user
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climbed steadily to 22
million
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in 2000, before soaring to a staggering 41
million
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in 2004. Second in terms of
internet
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use was Germany.
This
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country saw a threefold increase during the period in question, from 15
million
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people in 1995 to 14
million
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in 2000 and 15
million
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in 2004. A similar increase took place in France. The two nations with the fewest
internet
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users, meanwhile, were Switzerland and Spain. It is
also
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interesting to note that
internet
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shopping was far more common in the UK than in any other country listed. In fact, the prevalence of
internet
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shopping in Britain was double that of Germany and triple that of Switzerland. France and Spain, meanwhile, had moderate levels of online shopping.
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