The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts present the proportion of male and female
teachers
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in six different types of educational settings in the UK in 2010.
Overall
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, female
teachers
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mostly work in Nursery/preschoolschool and Primary
school
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,
While
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, male
teachers
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are the most interested in teaching at universities. it shows that woman
teachers
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have much concern about the kids and male
teachers
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are the opposite.
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, in 2010, Most of the female
teachers
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were working at preschoolschool and primary schools almost 100% and around 90%, respectively. The other types of education in the UK,
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as Secondary
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, College, and Private training institutes have the same percentages at around 50% .
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, for University, Woman lectures only get below 40%.
On the other hand
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, University is the place that most male
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are working in at below 80%. The Private training institute at below 60%. The college has no difference between male and woman
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. And
then
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, Secondary
school
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at above 40%, and
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, preschool and Primary
school
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have fewer male lectures just only at below 20% each.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words teachers, school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender distribution
  • educational setting
  • primary education
  • secondary education
  • nursery school
  • higher education
  • proportion
  • outnumber
  • trend
  • comparison
  • historical factors
  • social influence
  • teaching profession
  • data interpretation
  • balance
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