The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentages of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentages of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the number of volumes which were borrowed from June to September in the year of 2014 from four different village libraries.
Besides
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, the pie chart is given that shows the types of books in percents that were taken during
this
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period.
Overall
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, the figure for Sutton Wood was the most fluctuating one. Others experienced increases or declines.
On the other hand
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, the second graph presents 5 genres of books that were borrowed.
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the data shown in the line chart, the figure for West Eaton rose from June to August reaching its apex.
Then
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, it stayed without changing.
Next,
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in July, the number of volumes that were taken in Church Mount's library increased to 100. After that, it continued growing steadily and reached the same quantity as the previous one in August. The figure for Ryeslip always decreased throughout the period,
while
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the same for Sutton Wood fluctuated from 270, 100 and 300 which is its prime. Based on the second graph, the kinds of books borrowed were Self-Help, Fiction, History, Science and Biography. The most popular were Fiction volumes with 43%
whereas
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the least favourite was Self-Help with only 10%.
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