The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should * GDP (Gross Domestic Product) is the total value of goods that are made and services that are provided in a country.
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The bar graph illustrates the
changing
in twelve European countries (Belgium, Denmark, Estonia, France, Lithuania, Luxembourg, Netherlands, Norway, Poland, Slovenia, Spain and Replace the word
changes
Switzerland
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of
health spending rates in 2002, 2007 and 2012.
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in
Overall
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while
some countries experienced slight changes with increasing or decreasing over Linking Words
years
, some of them remained Correct article usage
the years
same
. Correct article usage
the same
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Switzerland
recorded the highest costs of healthcare, Use synonyms
opposed
to Estonia which had the lowest and 8% lower than Correct word choice
as opposed
Switzerland
across all three years.
Belgium, Estonia, Spain and Use synonyms
Switzerland
had the same pathway with remaining constant by 10, 3, 8, Use synonyms
11
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and 11
percents
respectively in the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Fix the agreement mistake
percent
Moreover
, Denmark, Lithuania, Norway, Poland and Slovenia were stable between 2002 and 2007. Linking Words
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, they saw a slight increase in 2012 by adding one Linking Words
percent
to their expenses, finishing at 10%, 6%, 10%, 7%,Change the spelling
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9
% by the end of the period.
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On the other hand
, France, Luxembourg and Linking Words
Netherlands
experienced a slight decrease over time. Correct article usage
the Netherlands
Also
, France's trend fluctuated, it started Linking Words
with
10 percent, inclined to 11% and dropped to 9%. Change preposition
at
Furthermore
, Luxembourg was 8% in the Linking Words
year
2002 and 2007, Fix the agreement mistake
years
then
it fell to 7%. Linking Words
Similarly
, Netherlands started with 10% and continued with 9%, Linking Words
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finally
it declined slightly to 8% Add a comma
finally,
at the end
of the period.Linking Words
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