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The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010
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The pie charts compare the consequences of a
survay
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survey
 in the Parkway Hotel in order to
aske
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ask
 visitors about the hotel’s customer service in two separate years, 2005 and 2010. It is clearly observed that the popularity of customer service was higher in the second year and most of the guests had
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 and good feel
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this
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 figure was lower in the first year . Looking at the information in detail, in 2005, the proportion of satisfactory client support was 45 per cent
whereas
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 that of in 2010 was lower at 17%. In 2005, only 5 per cent of people
were
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had
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excellent
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an excellent
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 feel about patron
sevice
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service
in contrast
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,
this
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 figure increased significantly and reached
at
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28 per cent in 2010. In 2005, visitors only rated 14%
to
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as
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good option
to
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for
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 customer service in Parkway Hotel
while
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that
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apply
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of
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in 2010 was higher at 39%. The figure for client support as
a
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apply
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poor and very poor were about 21% and 15% respectively in 2005.
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opposite
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the opposite
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, these percentages declined marginally
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 12% and 4% respectively in 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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