Some people believe the government should spend money on building trains and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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traffic

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congestion

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,

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the government

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should work on building

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and subway lines

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wider

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as well.A government should work on both facilities as discussed above.Wider and proper

roads

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have great

signifance

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significance

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great

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a great

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measure for the regulation of city

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discuss how subway lines and building

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can help in

regulation

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the regulation

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of

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in order to avoid

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.First of

all

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if a country has

good

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train facility

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of people that take private

taxes

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will prefer

trains

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and

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result

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there will be less

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during the morning and during

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working hours

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can provide great help to minimise

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congestion

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during rush hours.Not only train and subway lines will help people to commute but

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help to improve the economy of that particular state.

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hand

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if we talk about the significance of

construction

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the construction

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of

roads

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,constructing wider

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can be a great means to improve the

traffic

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flow.Construction of flyovers and

underpass

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should be considered since they are beneficial to reduce

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travel time.If the

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are wide there will be more tracks for cars and motorbikes

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can be helpful since the

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will be more organised. In conclusion to the above

discussion

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must say that

trains

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and

subwaylines

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subway lines

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wider

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are the basic necessity and a government should work on both.Not only

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will reduce the

congestion

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of

traffic

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but is

very

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important for the economy of

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and

welfare

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the welfare

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of the people.

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both measures have their significant value.