The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart displays the amount of winning of
Olympics's
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Olympics
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medals
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by Norway,
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USA
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the USA
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, Germany, Russia and Canada in two seasons winter and summer.
Overall
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, Norway is the
highest
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apply
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country with
most
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the most
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golden
medals
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over all countries in
winter
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the winter
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season in
addetion
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addition
to
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USA
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the USA
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with the second
high
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highest
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number of
medals
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.
However
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, in summer
USA
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increased significantly to be the highest
between
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among
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the five countries
over
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of
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all
times
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time
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.  In winter, Norway has just above 350
of
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apply
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Gold, Silver,and Bronze
Olympice
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Olympic
medals
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.
In contrast
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,
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USA
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the USA
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has around 300
medals
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of all colours. Canada and Russia approximately show a number of just under 200
medals
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. In
summer
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the summer
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season, the highest country of winning
meduls
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medals
is
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USA
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the USA
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with 2500
medals
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in all periods of time, and in all types of colours.
In contrast
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, France shows the lowest rate of around 500
medals
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. Comparing Russia to Germany, they are
closed
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close
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to each other with a number of just above 1500
medals
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
Vocabulary: Replace the words medals, usa with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • medal tally
  • top-performing countries
  • notable differences
  • highlight trends
  • summer vs. winter Olympics
  • significant differences
  • overall performance
  • comparative analysis
  • dominance in events
  • athletic prowess
  • statistical comparison
  • consistency in winning
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