The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart displays the amount of winning of
Olympics's
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Olympics
medals
by Norway, Use synonyms
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USA
, Germany, Russia and Canada in two seasons winter and summer.
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the USA
Overall
, Norway is the Linking Words
highest
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most
golden Correct article usage
the most
medals
over all countries in Use synonyms
winter
season in Correct article usage
the winter
addetion
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addition
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USA
with the second Correct article usage
the USA
high
number of Correct word choice
highest
medals
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USA
increased significantly to be the highest Use synonyms
between
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times
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In winter, Norway has just above 350 Fix the agreement mistake
time
of
Gold, Silver,and Bronze Change preposition
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Olympice
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Olympic
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In contrast
, Linking Words
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USA
has around 300 Correct article usage
the USA
medals
of all colours. Canada and Russia approximately show a number of just under 200 Use synonyms
medals
.
In Use synonyms
summer
season, the highest country of winning Add an article
the summer
meduls
is Correct your spelling
medals
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USA
with 2500 Correct article usage
the USA
medals
in all periods of time, and in all types of colours. Use synonyms
In contrast
, France shows the lowest rate of around 500 Linking Words
medals
. Comparing Russia to Germany, they are Use synonyms
closed
to each other with a number of just above 1500 Replace the word
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medals
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