The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevante.

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevante.
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The graph line displays information about how much
money
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spent
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on
books
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in four different countries
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, people in Germany spent the most
money
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in
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on
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books
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materials
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and materials
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through
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throughout
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the given period.
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the other countries
are
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fluctuated during the given time and in the end there
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was
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a
rose
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. Around 80
million
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dolas
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German citizens spent
money
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on
books
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in 1995
then
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there was a steady
rose
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rise
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until 1999 about 90
million
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dollars,
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reached
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its peak
around
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of around
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96
million
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in 2005. France in 1995 spent 56
million
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on
books
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and there was a steady increase through the given period until 2005 about 77
million
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. Italy fluctuated in the first four years which
is
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about 50
million
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after that there was an increase to just above 60
million
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in 2005. people from Australia spent in reading
materlais
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materials
in 1995 just below 30
million
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and
money
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spending remained stable for two years which was around 40
million
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after that there was a rapid
rose
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rise
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till 2005 just over 70
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, books, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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