The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. that's the question let me send you my answer
The line graph depicts the expenditure of overseas visitors in the UK from 1980 to 2010,
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the pie charts highlight the reasons for their visits during the same period.
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, the amount of money spent by international tourists increased significantly until the late 1990s before experiencing a slight decline. Holidays remained the most popular reason for visits, though the proportion of people visiting friends and relatives grew notably by 2010.
In 1980, overseas visitors spent approximately £7.5 million in the UK. Linking Words
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figure rose steadily, peaking at £12 million between 1995 and 2000. Linking Words
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, spending gradually declined to just under £10.5 million in 2010.
In terms of visit purposes, holidays accounted for 44.1% in 1980, the largest share, but Linking Words
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dropped to 39.1% by 2010. Business travel increased slightly, from 20.7% to 22.8%, Linking Words
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visits to friends or relatives grew significantly, from 18.7% to 28.2%. Linking Words
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, the category of "other reasons" decreased from 16.6% to just 9.8%.Linking Words
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