The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of

water

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consumed by several

countries

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which are ,Europe ,South

America

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, North

America

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, South East

Asia

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, Central

Asia

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and

Africa

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in different ways

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as , industrial, agricultural and domestic.

Overall

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, it is evident that agricultural use was the highest percentage in consuming

water

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while

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domestic use was the lowest in using

water

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for all 6

countries

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while

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using

water

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in industrial is considered as average. In North

America

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, the highest amount of

water

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is in industrial which is 48% ,

whereas

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just 13% of

water

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was used in domestic.South

America

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used 71% of

water

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in agriculture , 19 % in domestic and 10% in industrial.

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, Europe used the most

water

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for industrial purposes which was 53%. The remaining three

countries

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which are ,

Africa

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, Central

Asia

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and South East

Asia

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consumed more

water

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in agriculture.Central

Asia

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had the highest amount of using

water

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in plants which was 88% , 84% for

Africa

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and 81% in South East

Asia

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.Industrial and domestic were less used in these three

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for example

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, in

Africa

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there was just 7 % which used in industrial , 12 % in South East

Asia

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and just 5% in Central

Asia

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, both South East

Asia

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and Central

Asia

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have the same proportion of using

water

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in domestic which was 7%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, countries, america, asia, africa with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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228 words

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The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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