The US film industry has too much influence on the film industry around the world. Governments have a duty to invest money in their own film industries to protect and develop their cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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dynamically to their own mind.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Americanisation
Cultural imperialism
Local cinema
Cultural diversity
Cultural homogenization
Film subsidies
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