Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In my opinion the two ways (accepting bad
situations
and improving Use synonyms
situations
) do really make sense. But there are clearly advantages and disadvantages to it. Let’s talk about the first one, Accepting bad Use synonyms
situations
. For me Use synonyms
this
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way
is the least effective Use synonyms
way
, let me show you an example. My friend got heartbroken in Use synonyms
august
, since the day he broke up with his girlfriend he tried to accept it but it’s really hard because he still remembers the memories that they have together.
But he knows that if he still can’t let her go, when will he change, when will he move to the next stepCapitalize word
August
.
After all the motivation that he had, he Change the punctuation
?
finally
accepted it. Of course, accepting that kind of thing took him a long time. It took him 5 months to Linking Words
finally
accept the fact that the accident happened as Linking Words
he's
no longer with his girlfriend. As Wrong verb form
he was
i
said before, Change the capitalization
I
this
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way
is the least effective Use synonyms
way
because it took people long enough time to accept the truth, situation and faith.
Move on the second Use synonyms
way
, Improve Use synonyms
such
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situations
. Use synonyms
This
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way
is more effective because it actually makes you do something and not just sit down and accept the situation. Improving Use synonyms
stuff
helps you correct more Correct your spelling
staff
mistakes
in the past. It not Use synonyms
just
helps you improve your past Rephrase
only
mistakes
, but it Use synonyms
also
helps you to improve more to become better than you already are. Linking Words
This
technique helps you realize who you were in the past, and realize your Linking Words
mistakes
.
Use synonyms
Also
, by improving you will Linking Words
also
make your surroundings realize that you've changed, it shows that you are a better person than before. And by Linking Words
improvement
I'm sure that you will not make another mistake Add a comma
improvement,
like
you did in the past because you already know what you did back Replace the word
as
then
and you won’t make the same mistake again because the consequences are really hard to take.
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For example
, I used to be an obese. And by improving myself I realized my Linking Words
mistakes
in the past, Use synonyms
such
as eating junk food regularly, never doing any sports, always sleeping and drinking lots of soda. By improving myself I know the consequences that I will face if I continue doing that lifestyle, that’s why I chose to diet and Linking Words
lost
30 kg of weight so I can be a better and healthier version of myself.
So those are my honest opinions on both ways, but once again it comes back to you which Wrong verb form
lose
way
you prefer to choose. For Use synonyms
me
I chose Improving Situation because once you see the result of what you have improved, there's a sense of relief and happiness that you feel.Add a comma
me,
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