The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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of visitors to England attractions in Brighton.

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, all attraction places saw a fluctuation through the given period.

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people

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visiting

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and Pier saw a significant increase in the end.

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1980 to 1995,

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had visitors from around 27% and rose dramatically to above 45% before it went down to around 30% in 2010.

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visiting Art Gallery fluctuated between 1980 and 1990 from approximately 23% to below 20% after that

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number fell

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to just below 10% in 2010.

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who enjoy going to Festival had a steady decrease from 1980 to 1995 around 30% to 25% before a slight increase in the next five years

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remained stable until 2010. Visitors to Pier had a significant fluctuation during 20 years no more than 15%

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less than 3%

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went up to its peak in 2010

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20%

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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