The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.Write a report for a university lecturer reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.dung

the pie chart

compare

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different

type

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types

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of energy output in France

in

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two

year

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1995 and 2005

overall

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,in the two

year

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, the biggest change

on

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energy is nuclear, it saw a remarkable increase

by

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0,5 times

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the worst is petrol there was a steep downward trend

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about 10%. the resource

dominate

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in

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statistic

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is coal, it occupied

for

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29,8% and 30,93% in 1995 and 2005 respectively.

Next,

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the percentage of gas was 29,63% in

the

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1995 which was 0,68% lower than in 2005. Same as those 2 years,

the

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petrol witnessed a serious drop from 29,27% to 19,55% which is a decrease of nearly 10%. Opposite to petrol,nuclear power only

has

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6,4% in 1995. But in 2005, it

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a dramatic boom with the number was 10,1%

closely

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0,5

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to 0,5

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times. Other energy

source

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are no less competitive, it has just

hold

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4,9%

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increased to 9,1% in 1995 and 2005 respectively.