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The chart above shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

The chart above shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
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The chart above illustrates the amount of two different genders in Britain in their
further
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education
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 distinguished by its three periods and their types of enrollment.
Overall
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, the chart proves that most
female
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females
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 in its third
period
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 were most likely to choose a part-time
education
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.
Whereas
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, non-male students in the years 1970 to 1971
period
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 hold the lowest number for a full-time
education
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. To start with, most of the male students had their interest in a part-time
education
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 during the three periods.
In
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From
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 1970 to 1971, around 1000
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thousands
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thousand
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 non-female postgraduates enrolled themselves in it. Making it the highest number
than
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of
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 the rest two periods. In the second
period
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, the
demands
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demand
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in
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for
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non full-time
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non-full-time
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education
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were
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declined to 830
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thousands
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thousand
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 male students.
However
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, the number
for
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of
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 part-time
education
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was
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has
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 increased throughout the years. In terms of
the
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apply
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female postgraduates, the amount of interest
to
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in
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 both full-time and part-time
education
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had
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has
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 undergone
a
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constant growth. It started at 700
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thousands
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thousand
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 in the 1970 to 1971
period
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,
then
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, it
was
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increased to 1100
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thousands
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thousand
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 in the third
period
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, period, thousands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Further education
  • Full-time study
  • Part-time study
  • Enrollment trends
  • Gender differences
  • Societal factors
  • Economic factors
  • Period of time
  • Educational choices
  • Job market dynamics
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