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: the chart below shows the GDP growth per year for 3 countries japan, Tunisia and Ecuador between 2007 and 2010

: the chart below shows the GDP growth per year for 3 countries japan, Tunisia and Ecuador between 2007 and 2010
The given chart demonstrates the annual GDP development per year for 3 countries
Japan
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,Tunisia and
Ecuador
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 from 2007 to 2010
Overall
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, there was a similar decrease trend in both countries Tunisia and
Ecuador
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,
while
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Japan
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 witnessed a contrasting movement in the annual GDP
growth
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 in 4
years
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 of period.
Moreover
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,
Ecuador
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 took the lowest position in terms of
GPD
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GDP
growth
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 from
Japan
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. To
begining
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begin
, from 2007 to 2009, the
propotion
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proportion
 of GPD
growth
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 in Tunisia decreased by 3.0%
,
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 and experienced a period of stability at 3.0% in the next year. Moving on to
Japan
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, the rate of GDP
growth
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 increased dramatically
through
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over
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 4
years
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 from 2.0% to
near
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 7.0%.
Last
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 but not least, in the first 2
years
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 of the cycle,
Ecuador
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leveled
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levelled
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 out at 3.0% and went down gradually
at
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to
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 below 2.0% in
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last
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the last
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 2
years
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, ecuador, growth, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
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