The bar chart below shows the Percentage of Australian man and woman in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar graph illustrates the proportion of
Australian
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Australians
each
gender in different Change preposition
of each
age
groups who did regular physical Use synonyms
activicy
in 2010.
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activity
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
female categories experienced an increase until 65 Linking Words
age
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, male categories experienced a Linking Words
declined
until 45 Change the form of the verb
decline
age
. The most noticeable trend is that the female in Use synonyms
45
to 54 Correct article usage
the 45
age
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group
had the highest figure , Use synonyms
while
the male in Linking Words
35
to 44 Correct article usage
the 35
age
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group
showed the lowest.
Turning to the graph in more detail, the gap between Use synonyms
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
in Fix the agreement mistake
females
15
to 24 Correct article usage
the 15
age
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group
was the largest about 5 Use synonyms
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, the gap between Linking Words
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
in 65 and over Fix the agreement mistake
females
age
was the smallest. Use synonyms
In addition
, the proportion of male’s regular physical Linking Words
activity
dropped from 52.8% in Use synonyms
15
to 24 Correct article usage
the 15
age
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group
to 39.5% in Use synonyms
35
to 44 Correct article usage
the 35
age
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group
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the proportion of female’s regular physical Linking Words
activity
rose steadily from 47.7% in Use synonyms
15
to 24 Correct article usage
the 15
age
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group
to 53.3% in Use synonyms
45
to 54 Correct article usage
the 45
age
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group
. Use synonyms
Although
the figures Linking Words
of
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for
female’s
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female
activity
fell, it was still higher than the figures Use synonyms
of
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for
male’s
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male
activity
in Use synonyms
65
and over Correct article usage
the 65
age
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group
.Use synonyms
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