The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 120 100 80 60 40 20 0 2003 2004 2005 2006 Percentage of adults by age group using the Internet from 2003 to 2006 16-24 25-44 45-54 55-64 65

The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 120 100 80 60 40 20 0 2003 2004 2005 2006 Percentage of adults by age group using the Internet from 2003 to 2006 16-24 25-44 45-54 55-64 65
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The given column graph illustrates the
percentage
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of adults of different age groups using the
Internet
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between 2003 and 2006, in the Great Britain. The over 65s had the least
percentage
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of
Internet
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users. The main users of the
Internet
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were young adults aged between 16 and 24 years. In 2003 and 2004, they shared the same
percentage
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, which was 80%. In 2005,
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figure increased significantly to 100%, but decreased slightly to 90% in the next year. We can see from the chart that all the age groups experienced an upward trend as far as their daily use of the
Internet
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is concerned. In the 25-44 group, there was a gradual growth in the
percentage
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, from 50% to 80%, between 2003 and 2006. There were similar increases for the 45 to 54 year olds, rising from 60% in 2003 to 80% in 2006. As for the other two groups,
although
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the percentages had minor fluctuation, the
overall
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trend was upwards.
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, adults between 16 and 44 showed the greatest usage of the
Internet
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and the users grew with time regardless of their age.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, internet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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