The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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line graph illustrates the proportion of New Zealand
resisents
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residents
between the years 1950 and 2050.
Overall
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, the ones who were over the age of 65 took the lead meanwhile the age groups between 0-14 and 25 to 37
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the
last
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. At the beginning of the timeline, the elderly ones
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the most people who lived in New Zealand with
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the proportion
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of 60. There was a gradual increase until 1990, it
then
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started to drop slightly. It is estimated that
this
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number will decrease to 50% in the future. Interestingly, almost no one lived from the age group of 0-14 until 1990.
Then
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the ratios
rised stadily
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rose steadily
.
Moreover
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, the proportion for 25-37 increased
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5 percent after 1950.
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, the
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was stable for 3 decades
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it began to drop slowly.
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, the ratio for 38-45 experienced upward moderately, reached 50
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in 1990 but after a sudden downward, it was stable and
predected
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predicted
to be stable in the future as well.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratios" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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