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The table below shows the population ratio of males per 100 females in six different areas in 1955 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the population ratio of males per 100 females in six different areas in 1955 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides a comparison of the population rate of males per 100 females across six different regions - Africa, Asia,
Europe
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, North
America
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, South and Central
America
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, and Oceania - in 1955 and 2005.
Overall
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, it is apparent from the information supplied that Africa and
Europe
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 exhibited an upward trend during the given period
while
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 the opposite was true for the remaining areas.
In addition
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, Asia consistently maintained the highest ratio of males per 100 females over five decades
whereas
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Europe
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 was the lowest one. In detail, the population ratio of males per 100 females in Africa saw a significant rise of 1.4
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 from 97.8
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 in 1955 to 99.2
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 in 2005.
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,
Europe
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also
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 experienced a remarkable increase in that, growing from 89,4
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 in 1955 to 92,8
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 in 2005.
Conversely
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, the remaining regions showed a downward trend. Asia witnessed a moderate decline of 0,4
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 in the population rate of men per 100 women, dropping from 105.3
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 to 104.9
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 after 50 years.
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, there was a dramatic fall of 4.1
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 in the figure for Oceania, going down from 103.9
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 to 99.8
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. Followed by North
America
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 and South and Central
America
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, which experienced a plunge of 3.2
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 and 2.5
units
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 respectively, reaching 96.9 and 97.5
units
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 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words europe, america, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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