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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of Australian
men
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 and
women
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 across six different
age
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groups
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 who engaged in regular physical
activity
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 in 2010.
Overall
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, the
participation
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 rates for
women
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 were higher than
men
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 in all
age
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groups
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 except for the youngest category, 15 to 24 years, where
men
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 had a slightly higher percentage. The gap between genders was most pronounced in the middle
age
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groups
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, particularly for those aged 35 to 44. In detail, among the youngest
group
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 (15 to 24), 52.8% of
men
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 participated in regular physical
activity
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 compared to 47.7% of
women
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, making it the only
age
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group
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 where
men
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 outperformed
women
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.
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, for individuals aged 25 to 34,
women
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 overtook
men
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, with 48.9%
participation
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 compared to 42.2% for
men
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.
This
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 trend continued in the 35 to 44
age
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group
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, where
women
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 showed a much higher
participation
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 rate of 52.5%,
while
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 only 39.5% of
men
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 were physically active. The most balanced
participation
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 rates were seen in the oldest
group
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 (65 and over), where 46.7% of
men
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 and 47.1% of
women
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 engaged in regular physical
activity
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, showing almost no difference.
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, in the 55 to 64
group
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, the
participation
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 rates were relatively close, with 45.1% for
men
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 and 47.1% for
women
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. In conclusion,
women
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 generally demonstrated higher levels of regular physical
activity
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 than
men
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, except in the youngest
age
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group
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. The largest gender gap occurred in middle
age
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,
while
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 older
age
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groups
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 showed similar levels of
participation
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 between the two genders.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, age, groups, activity, participation, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Australian men
  • Australian women
  • Age groups
  • Regular physical activity
  • Participated
  • Increased
  • Decreased
  • Proportion
  • Physically active
  • Gender difference
  • Engaged
  • Exercise
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