The graphs below show customer satisfaction levels in the US with airlines and aspects of air travel in 2003, 2005, and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show customer satisfaction levels in the US with airlines and aspects of air travel in 2003, 2005, and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graphs illustrate the proportions of satisfaction levels of clients in the US
while
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airlines
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and the percentages of aspects of air
trip
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trips
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in 1999, 2000,
2007
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and 2007
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.
In addition
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, there are five sections; satisfaction during the flying experience.
Overall
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, the proportion of satisfied
airlines
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was shown
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showed
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an upward trend,
while
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there was a downward trend in the proportion of dissatisfied
airlines
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.
In addition
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, the figures for specific sections of the flying experience rose steadily between 1999 and 2007. Looking at the graph in more detail, the
percentage
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of satisfied
airlines
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increased from 65% to 72%.
In contrast
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, the
percentage
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of dissatisfied dropped from 32% to 24%. The most noticeable figure is that the
percentage
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of courtesy of check-in/gate agents fell slightly between 2000 and 2007.
However
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, the figures for the other three sections climbed continuously or had no differences. Meanwhile, the new section “comfort of seats,”
added
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was added
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in 2007.
Lastly
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, the
percentage
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of courtesy of flight attendants was the highest figure, reaching 92%,
while
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the proportion of
price
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the price
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of tickets was just 65%.
This
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means that many individuals did not like
price
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the price
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition, while".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words airlines, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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