The graphs below show customer satisfaction levels in the US with airlines and aspects of air travel in 2003, 2005, and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graphs illustrate the proportions of satisfaction levels of clients in the US
while
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airlines
and the percentages of aspects of air Use synonyms
trip
in 1999, 2000, Fix the agreement mistake
trips
2007
. Correct word choice
and 2007
In addition
, there are five sections; satisfaction during the flying experience.
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Overall
, the proportion of satisfied Linking Words
airlines
Use synonyms
was shown
an upward trend, Wrong verb form
showed
while
there was a downward trend in the proportion of dissatisfied Linking Words
airlines
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the figures for specific sections of the flying experience rose steadily between 1999 and 2007.
Looking at the graph in more detail, the Linking Words
percentage
of satisfied Use synonyms
airlines
increased from 65% to 72%. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the Linking Words
percentage
of dissatisfied dropped from 32% to 24%.
The most noticeable figure is that the Use synonyms
percentage
of courtesy of check-in/gate agents fell slightly between 2000 and 2007. Use synonyms
However
, the figures for the other three sections climbed continuously or had no differences. Meanwhile, the new section “comfort of seats,” Linking Words
added
in 2007. Add a missing verb
was added
Lastly
, the Linking Words
percentage
of courtesy of flight attendants was the highest figure, reaching 92%, Use synonyms
while
the proportion of Linking Words
price
of tickets was just 65%. Add an article
the price
This
means that many individuals did not like Linking Words
price
.Correct article usage
the price
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition, while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words airlines, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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