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The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
process
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 diagram illustrates the different steps in the operation of publishing a
book
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.
Overall
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, the
process
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 of publishing a
book
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 takes approximately 18 to 24 months.
However
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, the
process
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 contains nine stages. It is considered a man-made
process
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, beginning with writing a
book
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 and ending with the distribution of the
book
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 copies to bookshops.
Initially
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, after a writer finishes writing, it
sends
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 to a publishing house. Editors study the writer’s papers and check every detail before they contact the publishing house in order to plan and lay out the
book
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 design. Following that, they make a final decision with the writer on the layout and design of the
book
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. So they send it to a printing press.
Subsequently
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, the bookbinding stage takes place and produces the copies.
finally
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, they distribute the
book
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 copies to bookshops and libraries.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, book with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manuscript
  • publishing house
  • initial review
  • editors
  • suitability
  • editing process
  • fine-tuned
  • graphic designers
  • marketable
  • printing press
  • mass production
  • quality control
  • distribution
  • consumer market
  • marketing strategies
  • promotional strategies
  • visibility
  • cross-departmental collaboration
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