The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph displays the
rates
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of
unemployment
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in England, Europe and Japan in the years 1993 and 2007.
Overall
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, the
unemployment
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rates
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in the UK and Europe decreased
while
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in Japan the
rates
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of unemployed people increased. The
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rates
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of
unemployment
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in the UK began the period at nearly 11
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the highest rate among all the others. It began to decrease gradually year on year until it reached 5 in 2001.
Then
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, it began to
grew
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slightly until it reached 6 in 2007 to become the second highest among all the three regions. The
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rates
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of unemployed people in Europe began at nearly 9 in 1993 and went up dramatically to nearly 12 in 1997 before its gradual drop to just under 8 in 2007. The
uneployed
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unemployed
people in Japan started the time at just 2 as the lowest region in the rate of
the
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unemployment
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. It began to
grew
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slightly until it reached nearly 3 in 1999 before its significant increase to 6 in 2003.
Then
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, it gradually
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down to 4 in 2007 which
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the lowest country in the number of unemployed individuals.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rates, unemployment with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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