The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph displays the
rates
of Use synonyms
unemployment
in England, Europe and Japan in the years 1993 and 2007.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
unemployment
Use synonyms
rates
in the UK and Europe decreased Use synonyms
while
in Japan the Linking Words
rates
of unemployed people increased.
The Use synonyms
Use synonyms
rates
of Fix the agreement mistake
rate
unemployment
in the UK began the period at nearly 11 Use synonyms
as
the highest rate among all the others. It began to decrease gradually year on year until it reached 5 in 2001. Change preposition
apply
Then
, it began to Linking Words
grew
slightly until it reached 6 in 2007 to become the second highest among all the three regions. The Change the verb
grow
Use synonyms
rates
of unemployed people in Europe began at nearly 9 in 1993 and went up dramatically to nearly 12 in 1997 before its gradual drop to just under 8 in 2007.
The Fix the agreement mistake
rate
uneployed
people in Japan started the time at just 2 as the lowest region in the rate of Correct your spelling
unemployed
the
Correct article usage
apply
unemployment
. It began to Use synonyms
grew
slightly until it reached nearly 3 in 1999 before its significant increase to 6 in 2003. Change the verb
grow
Then
, it gradually Linking Words
drop
down to 4 in 2007 which Wrong verb form
dropped
remain
the lowest country in the number of unemployed individuals.Correct subject-verb agreement
remains
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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