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The table below shows the percentage of working men and women in different areas of employment in one country in 1986, 1996 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage of working men and women in different areas of employment in one country in 1986, 1996 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided charts illustrate the
employment
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rates
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 of
men
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 and
women
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 in
three
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 different countries—Canada, South
Korea
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, and Sweden—in 2005 and 2015.
Overall
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, the
employment
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rates
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 for
men
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 were consistently higher than those for
women
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 across all
three
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 countries in both years. Notably, the percentage of employed
men
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 increased by 10
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percent
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 in Canada and nearly 5
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percent
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 in South
Korea
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.
In contrast
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, Sweden experienced a decline of approximately 10
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percent
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 in male
employment
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 over the same period. In terms of female
employment
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, the
rates
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 rose in all
three
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 countries between 2005 and 2015. In Canada, the proportion of working
women
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 exceeded 50
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percent
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 by 2015, significantly narrowing the gender
employment
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 gap.
Similarly
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, Sweden saw an increase in female
employment
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, which helped reduce the disparity between
men
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 and
women
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.
However
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, South
Korea
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 presented a different trend:
while
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 the female
employment
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 rate remained almost unchanged, the gap between male and female
employment
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 continued to be the most pronounced among the
three
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 nations. In summary,
although
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men
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 maintained higher
employment
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rates
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 than
women
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 throughout the period, the gender gap decreased in most countries, except for South
Korea
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, where the disparity persisted.
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