The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people taking holidays at home, abroad or both or no holidays for the year 2014 and 2015
The table above depicts data on the percentage of
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people Change the capitalization
British
donate
money to charity by five different Wrong verb form
donating
age
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range
for the years 1990 and 2010.
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ranges
Overall
, it is evident that Linking Words
the
British citizens aged between 18-25, 26-35 and 36-50 Correct article usage
apply
give
more money to charity in 1990 as compared to 2010, Wrong verb form
gave
while
other Linking Words
age
groups between 51 to 65 Use synonyms
donate
more cash in the Wrong verb form
donated
year
2010.
Regarding Use synonyms
lowest
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the lowest
age
group 18-25, individuals Use synonyms
donate
around 17% , in the Wrong verb form
donated
year
1990, which was 10% more than Use synonyms
2010
. Change preposition
in 2010
Moreover
, these people have the Linking Words
least
Correct word choice
lowest
per-cent
among all Correct your spelling
percentage
age
groups. The next Use synonyms
age
groups 26-35 and 36-50, had Use synonyms
the
significant improvement in the Correct article usage
a
percent
for both Replace the word
percentage
age
people by Use synonyms
acquireing
the peak donation by Correct your spelling
acquiring
the
British citizens for Correct article usage
apply
Use synonyms
year
1990. Change the article
the year
However
, for the Linking Words
year
2010, the Use synonyms
most
percentage was observed by Correct word choice
highest
51
-65 group with 40%.Correct article usage
the 51
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