Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that in today’s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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everybody’s life and some of the

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that have been taught in schools are

history

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and

science

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. Some people question

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which of these two

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are more important to the

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?

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In my opinion, both

history

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and

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are equally significant school

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that

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need to take

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seriously for their knowledge and development.

History

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is a subject about

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origin, not only focused on

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history

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but

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ranges from a person’s life to the world’s best invention’s birth.

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, by learning world

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, the

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are able to learn how past kingdoms and wars affected many significant events and shaped today’s world.

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, they

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can gain a deeper understanding

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the sacrifices of their nation’s heroes and heroic tragedies before the independence of the country. Learning their country’s

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will open their eyes and they will appreciate more to protect their country from any future invasion. Learning

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and technology is to learn how our daily lives work and their own respective mechanism. And not only that, mastering these hard

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can make our life easier.

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, thanks to the

fundamental

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of physics,

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Brothers could make the world’s first flying object, which improved into today’s modern airplane, enabling people to travel around the world conveniently and faster. If they had not learned

physics

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the physics

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of how to make heavy

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fly, we would not be able to fly to another nation comfortably.

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,

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and

science

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and technology are fairly important not only in school

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to score high in big exams

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but throughout our lives. Teachers and parents

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to play important roles

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students

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and children to pay attention to these

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in schools

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and to learn not only

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and

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high in exams

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but to take valuable lessons from them.