You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You know find that you cannot continue the course. Write the letter to the course tutor. In your letter: -Describe your situation -Explain why you cannot continue at this time -Say what action you would like to do

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Dear sir, I am writing with regard to inform you that I am able to continue my part-time

english

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speaking course. Working as

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full time

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emloyee

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employee

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multi-national company, I have

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with

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responsible

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and duties

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that I am not getting enough time to do my

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. As I am aware

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our

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speaking classes schedule is Wednesday to Friday 5

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to 6

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, now my company extended my working hours from 8

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to 6

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. Considering

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timing of my work I do not have any space between to attend classes. I have two solutions in

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matter.

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, I would like to change the

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classes

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to 7

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of the time

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not possible

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please

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refund

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my course. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Kind Regards, Zalak Vyas

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coherence cohesion

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task achievement

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task achievement

The task is well understood, and a complete response is provided regarding the inability to continue the course.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate for a formal communication.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

153 words

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