The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of men and women in Australia across various age ranges who were physically active in 2010.
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, the vast majority of women with age differences were more active than men.
While
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the highest percentage of physical activity
exhibited
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in the youth, adults were considered to be the least active inhabitants of the country. The active years of females, with
considerable
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higher figures than males, were observed between 35 and 64, showing above 52% each. Adult females, who participated in exercises, represented approximately 49%. The youngest and eldest generations of ladies were almost the same active, representing 47% each. Males,
on the other hand
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, tended to be the most active ones in their youth at around 53%.
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, the lowest point of engaging in the sport occurred
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their
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middle age, from 35 to 44, standing at merely 39,5%. The other groups showed more or less
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similar figures, from 42% to almost 47%.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Australian men
  • Australian women
  • Age groups
  • Regular physical activity
  • Participated
  • Increased
  • Decreased
  • Proportion
  • Physically active
  • Gender difference
  • Engaged
  • Exercise
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