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You have made a reservation at a hotel for a business trip for you and your colleagues. However, you need to make some changes to your booking. Write a letter to the hotel manager. give details of your current booking explain what changes you need to make and why ask the manager to make some special arrangements for your business meetings

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Dear
sir
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Sir
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 or
madam
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Madam
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, A few days ago, I reserved 3 single
room
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rooms
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 for a business trip on your website and I am writing
this
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 letter to kindly request
for
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apply
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some changes
in
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to
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 my booking that
was
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were
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 made on 25th October My booking reference code is BAD3485 and I was supposed to stay there with some colleagues from 2nd to 6th November. As you may know, all the flights to London
has
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have
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 been cancelled
due to
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 the bad weather, so I would highly appreciate
if
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 you could postpone our stay for approximately a week later, between 9th and 13th November.
In addition
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 to that, since we are planning to have some meetings with our clients, I was wondering if you
can
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could
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 arrange a conference room with a big screen and a microphone for us.
Besides
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, it would be nice to have fresh drinks and small snacks
in
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at
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 our business meetings. Of course, we are ready to pay for
further
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 expenses,
on
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at
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 your request. Thank you in advance and I am looking forward to
hear
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hearing
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 from you. Yours faithfully Robert July

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task achievement
Ensure to mention specific details about your booking, such as the type of rooms and any special requirements for the conference room.
coherence and cohesion
Consider using more varied linking words to enhance the flow of your writing.
task achievement
The letter is polite and appropriately worded, which reflects a suitable writing tone.
coherence and cohesion
The structure of the letter is generally clear, with a good distinction between your request for changes and additional arrangements.
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