Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter regarding my hand luggage which I lost in during my flight from London to

vancouver

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Vancouver

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.After taking

bags

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the bags

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from

luggage

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the luggage

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area I Realised that I

have

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had

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forgotten

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left

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my handbag

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plane

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a plane

the plane

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last

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wednesday

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Wednesday

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.I will describe the

characterstics

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characteristics

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bag

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the bag

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and it will help you to

locating

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locate

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hand

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handbag

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bag

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. It is a

black colured

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black-coloured

leather

bag

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with two front open pockets and one zipped pocket .It is made by

coach

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a coach

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company and there is one chain locket attached

with

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its front zip.

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bag

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contain

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contains

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my business documents,keys and passport. These all things are very valuable

for

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me .If I could not get these things back ,I would feel ashamed

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my mistake. It

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contain

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contains

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$450 and my credit cards. I hope you will take my concern seriously and find my

bag

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as soon as possible.Please let me know whenever you will find it. Thanking you Aman

amansandhu2227Mon Feb 03 2025

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tone

Add a polite opening and closing statement to enhance the tone of the letter. For example, you could start with 'I hope this message finds you well.' and end with 'I look forward to your prompt response.'

content

The description of the bag is clear and detailed, which would help the airline to identify it effectively.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

154 words

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Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

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