You are due to give a presentation at work at the end of this week, but you are unwell and would like to postpone the presentation. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter, Describe the presentation Explain why you cannot deliver the presentation on the scheduled day Request a different date for your presentation You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear...,

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Dear si, I am writing
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letter to inform you I got
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, So, I will not be able to do the presentation on time. The presentation about
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and I should
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introduce
them to the staff ,
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I should show them the facilities in the company as Jym and
Library
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the Library
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, Pool
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and pool
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Also
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they want to see how we are working, And
location
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the
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office My son
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playing with his friend and
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he broke his leg,
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, He is in hospital now,
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, he has surgery on
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day
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presentation,
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, I will not be in a good condition to do it. I will be well
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next week, on Monday preferred, Because,
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weekend
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the weekend
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I am going to be in the hospital and on
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Saturday
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home. Thank you, I am looking forward to hearing back from you. Sincerely Kim Yountie

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greeting and closing
Make sure to provide a proper greeting and closing. For example, 'Dear [Manager's Name], and 'Sincerely, Kim Yountie' would enhance the professionalism of the letter.
writing tone
Consider revising sentences for clarity and grammar. For instance, 'I have an excuse' could be replaced with 'I regret to inform you' for a more polite tone.
logical structure
Try to organize the content with clearer separation of ideas, such as describing the presentation in one paragraph and your reason for rescheduling in another.
content
You provided a clear explanation of the situation and your son’s condition, which adds a personal touch to your request.
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The intention to postpone the presentation shows responsibility and respect for your work commitments.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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