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Band 5.5

Write a letter to a hotel manager in another city for an upcoming 2 day business trip for you and your colleagues. In your letter, You should tell : Introduce yourself and colleagues give information about the business meeting tell other requests you moght have.

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Dear sir, I am Rinkesh Patel, manager at ABC company. It is one of the most
valueable
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valuable
company
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companies
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 having more than 50 branch offices
in
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apply
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all over
india
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India
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. Our organisation is specialized in
coonecting
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connecting
 wires and
network
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networks
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 for telecommunication. Our institute has organised
the
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a
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 development seminar for branch managers and regional associates
to
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in
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 Udaipur.
Moreover
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, The trip will be for two days and two nights followed by some learning activities and some adventures with
all
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everyone
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. We will be arriving
at
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on
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monday
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Monday
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 morning and will check out on
wednesday
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Wednesday
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 evening. As our
bughet
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budget
 is 2000$ for
this
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 trip
therefore
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 we
select
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selected
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 Lords Plazza
hotel
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Hotel
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, which is near
to
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apply
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the forest.
Apart from
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this
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, we are
total
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a total
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twenty
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of twenty
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 members and need of double
bed room
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bedroom
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.
As a
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result
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result,
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 we need only ten rooms with
high speed
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high-speed
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 wifi , breakfast and dinner respectively. We
expect
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expect to
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 pick up and drop off from
airport
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the airport
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 to the auditorium. I request you to please give me
response
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a response
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 as soon as
possbile
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possible
 and if there is any package for corporate. Yours sincerely, Rinkesh Patel

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coherence
Consider adding a brief introduction about the purpose of your letter at the beginning to ensure clarity.
task achievement
Your letter has a clear purpose and outlines your requirements well.
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