THE BAR CHART BELOW GIVES INFORMATION ABOUT THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS STUDYING COMPUTER SCIENCE AT A UK university between 2010 and 2012. Summarise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

THE BAR CHART BELOW GIVES INFORMATION ABOUT THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS STUDYING COMPUTER SCIENCE AT A UK university between 2010 and 2012. Summarise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The charts provide information about the
figure
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of
students
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who studied computer science at a United Kingdom university between 2010 and 2012.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
number
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of British male
students
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fluctuated,
while
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female
students
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who
was
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born
at
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in
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the
U.K
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UK
increased from 2010 to 2012. In the case of
students
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who went abroad
for studying
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to study
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at
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in
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the United Kingdom increased in both genders over the given period. Looking at the chart in more detail, British male
students
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were almost 40 in 2010, declining to 23
students
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a year after and the
number
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of British male
students
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in 2012 exceeded 40
students
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. Notably, the
number
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of female
students
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increased
20
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from 20
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in 2010 to 23
students
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in 2011, rising drastically to 39
students
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in 2012 . Turning to the two remaining data sets, the
number
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of male international university
students
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who studied computer science
at
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in
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a
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the
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United Kingdom increased
32
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from 32
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in 2010 to 44 in 2011 and 45 in 2012.
Similarly
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, the
number
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of female international
students
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increased
15
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from 15
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in 2010 to 17 in 2011 and 18 in 2012.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • breakdown
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
  • spike
  • drop
  • percentage change
  • overall
  • noteworthy
  • observations
  • main features
  • comparison
  • relevant
  • highlight
  • significant
  • summarize
  • gender analysis
  • male students
  • female students
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