On
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this
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we are going to compare the different ways that people use Add a comma
text,
to
transport in the eastern and in the western regions and Fix the infinitive
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rest
of the country. In the eastern Correct article usage
the rest
part
we can see that Add a comma
part,
a
60% of the transportation is through the road which means that most things move by cars, buses or bicycles. Correct article usage
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Also
in the western Linking Words
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region
it is the most common way to transport but with Add a comma
region,
a
35%. Correct article usage
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This
fact Linking Words
make
me think that maybe the western Change the verb form
makes
region
is more advanced in technology and it is starting to find easier, Use synonyms
cheap
, cheaper and more effective ways to transfer things. Now we are going to talk about the least percentage way to transport things. Starting with the eastern part it is a tie between pipeline and air with 5%. In the western Correct word choice
cheaper
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region
it is Add a comma
region,
also
a tie between air and rivers with a 10%. I think that both regions use depending on their land I imagine that the western part has much more water canals and it's a bigger land than the Linking Words
Easter
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eastern
region
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according to
their numbers because Linking Words
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the road
road
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roads
is
for smaller territories and air and canals for bigger lands.Correct subject-verb agreement
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