The graph below shows the number of international graduates from UK universities in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. jj 2

The graph below shows the number of international graduates from UK universities in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. jj 2
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The graph demonstrates data about multinational alumni from universities of Great Britain in 15
years
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, all six categories increased over the period shown. Cambridge, Oxford and London finished with being leaders, meanwhile
other
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the other
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three categories reached
less
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numbers. As
it is
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illustrated in the bar chart, among all six categories Oxford
university
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University
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was
on
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at
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top
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the top
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of the rankings in 2015. It had grown from 15% to 25% increased by 10% in 15
years
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Meanwhile
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Cambridge was ahead
for
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by
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2%
than
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of
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Oxford in 2000. But, it rose
for
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23 % in 2015.
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Although
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, over the fifteen
years
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of time London academy
graduaters
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graduates
graduate
experienced
significant
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a significant
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rose
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in
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of
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almost 13 % and it was the third leader. Moving to other schools with low rates, Cardiff
university
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University
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was at 10% , Bristol and Bath were at 7% and 6% in 2000.
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However
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Cardiff and Bath continued to rise in percentage by 4% and nearly 5%,
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Bristol finished with just a 2% increment after 15
years
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
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