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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie charts provide information about the
proportion
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 of
water
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 for industrial, agricultural and domestic
use
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 in six areas of the world.
Overall
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,
while
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 the percentage of
water
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 in agricultural
use
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 is higher in South
America
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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, the
proportion
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 of
water
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 in industrial
usage
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 is higher in North
America
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 and
Europe
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. From the outset, it can be clearly seen that the
proportion
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 of
water
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 in industrial
usage
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 by North
America
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 and
Europe
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 exhibit slightly different consumption, with the former at 48% and the latter at 53%.
Moreover
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, the
usage
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 of
water
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 for agriculture is higher in North
America
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,
while
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Europe
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 consumes 32%. The percentage of
water
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use
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 for domestic purposes in
Europe
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 at 15%,
while
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 in North
America
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 slightly less, at 13%.
Furthermore
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, the
proportion
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 of
water
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usage
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 for agricultural purposes is dominated by South
America
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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. The figures for
water
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 consumption for agriculture are higher in Central
Asia
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 at 88%,
whereas
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 South
America
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 exhibits considerably less consumption at 71%, but with the highest
proportion
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 of
water
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use
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 for domestic purposes. In Africa, the percentage of
water
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 for agriculture at 84%,
whereas
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 South East
Asia
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 is slightly less is 81%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, water, use, america, asia, usage, europe with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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