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Band 5

You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from to your email Give details of purchase Describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently

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Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to inform you that I am a regular customer of your brand so I ordered a
fanci
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fancy
 dress but I am not satisfied
for
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this
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. First and foremost,I saw your new outlet collection on the website and I adore a dress which I need because my
cousin
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cousin's
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sister
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sister's
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 marriage was held
in
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8th
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 of
march
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 so I have no time to go
for
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shopping
due to
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 my busy schedule that's why I booked
this
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.
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,when I received my parcel,
i
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obsessed
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for
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this
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,I opened it and when I saw my suit the colour of the dress
has
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 changed which I ordered
although
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 the stuff
has
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also
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low
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a low
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 quality
that
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as
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shown
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was shown
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 on their page. I
upset
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 to
saw
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see
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this
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 . I want to request
you
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apply
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that I
need to
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replace
this
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 urgently as I mentioned before my
cousin
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cousin's
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 marriage ceremony
was
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is
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 very soon.I have
never
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 other option
to
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but to
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 wear
this
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 function. I am thankful
to
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 your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Rabia Rizwan

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coherence and cohesion
Try to use a clearer structure by separating the details of your purchase, the problem, and the urgency more distinctly.
task achievement
Make sure to check for grammatical errors and word choice to enhance your message clarity.
task achievement
You clearly stated your relationship with the brand and the issue you faced with your order.
task achievement
Your urgency for a replacement is well-explained, making it clear why prompt action is needed.
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